Wednesday, 7 August 2019

CHARACTER IN THE MAKING


The following piece of writing is not a story, but just a bit of character development.  I haven’t done anything else with it, but may still use it for a longer story at a later date.

HE HAUNTED THE NIGHT

He haunted the night in search of excitement like a raccoon in search of food for survival.  Six feet tall and husky, with a baseball cap on his head and a jacket too light for the cold, and his hands shoved into his pockets to keep them warm, he sauntered through the downtown core of Langley City each night after dark.  Thoughts and ideas, hopes and fears churned too fast in his head to let him stay inside.  He needed his outside world to match the one inside him.  There was a deep craving inside commanding him to find the fast, furious, eddying ferment of someone else’s frustration.

Each night he followed the same trail.  First a fast food outlet for sustenance.  Then a pub to see if someone he knew would buy him a beer.  Then the Legion for the same reason.  Or maybe he could score some cash by offering to sell somebody something.  Used CDs.  Battery chargers.  A used ebike he knew someone wanted to sell.  He’d take a cut.  Unable to sit still, his prowl was never ending.

He walked the streets and stalked the alleys, looking into doorways and peering through beckoning windows.  He needed the excitement of danger, distress or disaster, but not to be the cause of it.  Yearning to witness the eye of the storm, he scoured the town like the raccoon scenting garbage to feed on.  Anything would do.  A cash grab at the convenience store.  Someone stealing a car.  A break and enter.  A beating.  A rape.  Anything to match the turmoil inside him.

When the night betrayed him with only silence, he’d slink home at dawn and sleep and hide through the day, just like the raccoon in waiting.

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By Lisa A. Hatton

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